Introduction Harry Kizirian Elementary is a mediocre school with a goal to help children further their education in reading, writing, and mathematics. It is located in an urban setting in the center of Providence, Rhode Island. Students at this elementary have an extremely high attendance rate, everyday 560 students grade K-6 rush to school in hopes to learn something new. The goal of this report is to provide useful information about the schools itself, the community that surrounds it and its professional help, in hopes to give incoming students or teachers an idea of the environment at Harry Kizirian Elementary School. Community Background Harry Kizirian Elementary is located in Providence a county, an area consisting of diversity and acceptance. The population in providence is continually increasing leaving us with a current population of 626,650. There are approximately 49,587 black/ African Americans, 18,007 Asians, 487,235 White/ Caucasians, and 83,232 Hispanics. Although poverty rates are improving, 15% of children under the age of eighteen are still living in poverty. Although Providence County is successful in having an extremely diverse community, it is satisfactory in education. Unfortunately only 31.3% of students actually graduate high school with a diploma; most students do poorly in school and are unable to graduate, others give up and make the decision to drop out. Also poverty plays a major role in the ability to graduate, statistics show that only 11.3% of students living in poverty graduate a year. With a suspension rate of 46 to 30 Providence to Rhode Island, the violence rate in providence has shown to be significantly higher than the rest of Rhode Island.
Subject
Both Sexes
Male
Female
EDUCATIONAL ATTAINMENT (highest level)
Population 18 to 24 years
68,481
33,481
35,000
Less than high school graduate
14,513
8,163
6,350
High school graduate (incl. equivalency)
18,287
9,442
8,845
Some college or associate degree
29,671
13,316
16,355
Bachelor's degree or higher
6,010
2,560
3,450
Population 25 years and over
403,779
186,306
217,473
Less than 5th grade
13,879
5,880
7,999
5th to 8th grade
28,949
12,609
16,340
9th to 12th grade, no diploma
68,385
32,559
35,826
High school graduate (incl. equivalency)
113,341
50,389
62,952
Some college credit, less than 1 year
24,664
10,399
14,265
1 or more years of college, no degree
41,982
19,036
22,946
Associate degree
26,721
11,973
14,748
Bachelor's degree
52,499
26,764
25,735
Master's degree
22,469
10,043
12,426
Professional degree
7,378
4,409
2,969
Doctorate degree
3,512
2,245
1,267
District Summary There are 37,972 children in the Providence School district and 26 schools. Although 90% of all children in the Providence school district are enrolled in school only approximately 63% of students graduate a year (info works graduation rates). The teacher to student ratio is 1:14. Most teachers in the district are qualified to hold a job as a teacher but some argue that the teachers are not experienced enough or need more training. In a survey 29% of teachers said that lack of training in teachers in the Providence school district is a moderate or major problem (info works: professional development)! The major issue of the Providence school district is the abundance of children living in poverty. Approximately 35 % of all 37,972 children in providence are living below the federal poverty threshold. The schools in this district do all they can to make sure these children stay in school; one of which is a subsidized lunch program. Roughly 82% of students qualify for free or reduced-priced lunches (info works district demographics and indicators). Another battle the Providence district faces is higher suspension rates; the suspension rate in providence middle schools is 145.5 versus the states rate of 41.2. The most popular reasons for suspension in this district are cutting classes or detention, assaulting a student, fighting, disorderly conduct, and/or subordination. School Analysis Students at Harry Kizirian Elementary put effort in trying to do well on improving their reading, writing, and math skills but their satisfactory grades are shown to be over 50% lower than the rest of the Rhode Island Elementary Schools. An issue that might add to the students’ low-test scores is parent involvement. The schools overall math scores barley meet the state target and are slowly decreasing. In a SALT survey the majority of the 4th, 5th, and 6th graders said that their parents “sometimes” engage in educational enrichment activities and 6th graders said that their parents “hardly ever” talk to them about interactions they had at school with teachers/ peers or the future (SALT: Family Involvement in Education). The percentage of violence at Harry Kizirian remains average, in the school year of 2006- 2007 there were 63 incidents mostly consisting of assaulting a student, fighting, and disorderly conduct. One accomplishment Harry Kizirian can be proud of is its consistency to meet the no child is left behind target (2007 School Report Card). Also this elementary schools attendance rate is 92.5%, which exceeds the state target by 2.5%! However, according to the 2008 Rhode Island School Report Card Harry Kizirian Elementary School is classified under insufficient progress and has only met 20 targets out of the 25 targets evaluated. By taking the average grades of the students at Harry Kizirian it showed that students with disabilities, English-language learners, economically disadvantaged students, and Hispanic students’ mathematics grades fall significantly lower than the state target. Conclusion Just like any other school, Harry Kizirian elementary has its pro’s and con’s. Its abundance in number of students makes for a diverse environment where children are able to experience different ethnicities, but its lack in extracurricular activities and inexperienced teachers is detrimental to a student’s educational growth. Overall I believe this school is a diamond in the rough, with more parent involvement and dedicated teachers the students of Harry Kizirian can get the education that they deserve. References U.S. Census Bureau, (2000). American FactFinder. Retrieved October 20, 2009, from U.S. Census Bureau Web site: http://factfinder.census.gov/servlet/SAFFPopulation U.S. Census Bureau, (2000). American FactFinder. Retrieved October 20, 2009, from U.S. Census Bureau Web site: http://factfinder.census.gov/servlet/SAFFIteratedFacts Information Works!, (2008). School Reports: Burrillville Middle School. Retrieved October 19, 2009 from Information Works! Web site: http://infoworks.ride.uri.edu/2008/state/kidscount.pdf Rhode Island KIDS COUNT, (2009). Indicators of Child Well-Being, 2009. Retrieved October 19, 2009, from RI KIDS COUNT Web site: http://www.rikidscount.org/matriarch/documents/Providence2009%282%29.pdf
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compares each figure with another relevant figure (e.g. state or national average) and
states whether or not the school is meeting NCLB standards.
4 - Report includes at least eight different facts in each section and
compares most figures with relevant values and
states whether or not the school is meeting NCLB standards.
3 - Report includes at least six different facts in each section and
compares some of the figures to other relevant figures
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compares some of the figures to other relevant figures.
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Harry Kizirian Elementary School
IntroductionHarry Kizirian Elementary is a mediocre school with a goal to help children further their education in reading, writing, and mathematics. It is located in an urban setting in the center of Providence, Rhode Island. Students at this elementary have an extremely high attendance rate, everyday 560 students grade K-6 rush to school in hopes to learn something new. The goal of this report is to provide useful information about the schools itself, the community that surrounds it and its professional help, in hopes to give incoming students or teachers an idea of the environment at Harry Kizirian Elementary School.
Community Background
Harry Kizirian Elementary is located in Providence a county, an area consisting of diversity and acceptance. The population in providence is continually increasing leaving us with a current population of 626,650. There are approximately 49,587 black/ African Americans, 18,007 Asians, 487,235 White/ Caucasians, and 83,232 Hispanics. Although poverty rates are improving, 15% of children under the age of eighteen are still living in poverty.
Although Providence County is successful in having an extremely diverse community, it is satisfactory in education. Unfortunately only 31.3% of students actually graduate high school with a diploma; most students do poorly in school and are unable to graduate, others give up and make the decision to drop out. Also poverty plays a major role in the ability to graduate, statistics show that only 11.3% of students living in poverty graduate a year. With a suspension rate of 46 to 30 Providence to Rhode Island, the violence rate in providence has shown to be significantly higher than the rest of Rhode Island.
District Summary
There are 37,972 children in the Providence School district and 26 schools. Although 90% of all children in the Providence school district are enrolled in school only approximately 63% of students graduate a year (info works graduation rates). The teacher to student ratio is 1:14. Most teachers in the district are qualified to hold a job as a teacher but some argue that the teachers are not experienced enough or need more training. In a survey 29% of teachers said that lack of training in teachers in the Providence school district is a moderate or major problem (info works: professional development)!
The major issue of the Providence school district is the abundance of children living in poverty. Approximately 35 % of all 37,972 children in providence are living below the federal poverty threshold. The schools in this district do all they can to make sure these children stay in school; one of which is a subsidized lunch program. Roughly 82% of students qualify for free or reduced-priced lunches (info works district demographics and indicators). Another battle the Providence district faces is higher suspension rates; the suspension rate in providence middle schools is 145.5 versus the states rate of 41.2. The most popular reasons for suspension in this district are cutting classes or detention, assaulting a student, fighting, disorderly conduct, and/or subordination.
School Analysis
Students at Harry Kizirian Elementary put effort in trying to do well on improving their reading, writing, and math skills but their satisfactory grades are shown to be over 50% lower than the rest of the Rhode Island Elementary Schools. An issue that might add to the students’ low-test scores is parent involvement. The schools overall math scores barley meet the state target and are slowly decreasing. In a SALT survey the majority of the 4th, 5th, and 6th graders said that their parents “sometimes” engage in educational enrichment activities and 6th graders said that their parents “hardly ever” talk to them about interactions they had at school with teachers/ peers or the future (SALT: Family Involvement in Education). The percentage of violence at Harry Kizirian remains average, in the school year of 2006- 2007 there were 63 incidents mostly consisting of assaulting a student, fighting, and disorderly conduct.
One accomplishment Harry Kizirian can be proud of is its consistency to meet the no child is left behind target (2007 School Report Card). Also this elementary schools attendance rate is 92.5%, which exceeds the state target by 2.5%! However, according to the 2008 Rhode Island School Report Card Harry Kizirian Elementary School is classified under insufficient progress and has only met 20 targets out of the 25 targets evaluated. By taking the average grades of the students at Harry Kizirian it showed that students with disabilities, English-language learners, economically disadvantaged students, and Hispanic students’ mathematics grades fall significantly lower than the state target.
Conclusion
Just like any other school, Harry Kizirian elementary has its pro’s and con’s. Its abundance in number of students makes for a diverse environment where children are able to experience different ethnicities, but its lack in extracurricular activities and inexperienced teachers is detrimental to a student’s educational growth. Overall I believe this school is a diamond in the rough, with more parent involvement and dedicated teachers the students of Harry Kizirian can get the education that they deserve.
References
U.S. Census Bureau, (2000). American FactFinder. Retrieved October 20, 2009, from U.S. Census Bureau Web site:
http://factfinder.census.gov/servlet/SAFFPopulation
U.S. Census Bureau, (2000). American FactFinder. Retrieved October 20, 2009, from U.S. Census Bureau Web site:
http://factfinder.census.gov/servlet/SAFFIteratedFacts
Information Works!, (2008). School Reports: Burrillville Middle School. Retrieved October 19, 2009 from Information Works! Web site:
http://infoworks.ride.uri.edu/2008/state/kidscount.pdf
Rhode Island KIDS COUNT, (2009). Indicators of Child Well-Being, 2009. Retrieved October 19, 2009, from RI KIDS COUNT Web site:
http://www.rikidscount.org/matriarch/documents/Providence2009%282%29.pdf
http://schnet.ncpe.uri.edu/data/800/25274/08/st-e-hg-23.PDF
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states whether or not the school is meeting NCLB standards.
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Introduction = REPLACEWITHSCORE/ 5 pts.
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Mechanics = REPLACEWITHSCORE / 5 pts.
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Conclusion = REPLACEWITHSCORE / 5 pts.
Creativity = REPLACEWITHSCORE / 5 pts.
Thoroughness = REPLACEWITHSCORE /10 pts
compares each figure with another relevant figure (e.g. state or national average) and
states whether or not the school is meeting NCLB standards.
compares most figures with relevant values and
states whether or not the school is meeting NCLB standards.
compares some of the figures to other relevant figures
compares some of the figures to other relevant figures.
fails to compare any figures with other relevant figures.